Crafting Beautiful Sentences with Emily Bitto

Learn practical strategies to improve your writing on a sentence level

Join award-winning author Emily Bitto for this empowering self-paced course that will help you to improve your writing on a sentence level.

Regardless of form or style, all writers work with words and sentences as the basic units of prose. This course provides practical strategies to reinvigorate your writing practice, allowing you to write more freely and imaginatively, avoid cliché, understand the effects of various sentence-level choices on your prose style, and edit your work and the work of others more effectively. The course involves a combination of mini lectures, examples, writing and editing exercises to help you elevate your sentences from ordinary to sublime, with a particular focus on fiction writing.

You'll learn:

  • To better understand what makes a good (or a bad) sentence
  • The nuts and bolts of basic grammar
  • To better understand the impact that sentence-level decisions can have on the tone and voice of your writing, and how to achieve particular effects for your readers
  • The important difference between the drafting and editing stages in terms of your approach to writing on the sentence level
  • Practical skills, techniques and exercises that you can continue to apply long after the end of the course

Scroll down to see the full course curriculum and a list of frequently asked questions.

"This course has provided me with a powerful toolkit for improving my fiction writing on a sentence level. I feel a greater level of confidence when it comes to crafting evocative imagery, and self editing. I now understand the difference between a great sentence and a poorly crafted or amateur sounding sentence. Thank you Emily!"

"Emily is a fantastic teacher who concisely conveys her thoughts and ideas. The content was easy to understand, with many "aha!" moments sprinkled throughout the course. My understanding of sentences, as well as of my own writing style has improved as a result of taking this course. Thank you Emily!"

"Crafting beautiful sentences' gave practical advice about elevating writing through being more creative and precise at the sentence level with clear guidance about putting the tips into practice. The activities really challenged my use of cliches! I can see improvements in my writing straight away."

"I bought the bundle of creative writing courses and Crafting Beautiful Sentences seemed like the logical place to start this new phase of my writing career! Now I look back at my earlier writing and wish I had done this course ten years ago."

KYD Members receive a 10% discount on this course and all other KYD online courses throughout the year. Become a member here, or contact [email protected] for more information.

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Your Instructor


Emily Bitto
Emily Bitto

Emily Bitto is an award-winning writer of fiction, non-fiction and poetry. She has a Masters in Literary Studies and a PhD in Creative Writing from the University of Melbourne. Her debut novel, The Strays, was shortlisted for the VPLA Unpublished Manuscript Award, and went on to win the 2015 Stella Prize. Her second novel, Wild Abandon, was published in October 2021 by Allen and Unwin. Emily has been teaching for over a decade.


Course Curriculum


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Frequently Asked Questions


When does the course start and finish?
The course starts now and never ends! It is a completely self-paced online course - you decide when you start and when you finish. We encourage you to approach this material not just as lessons to be finished once and for all, but also as a collection of resources to which you can return time and again.
How long do I have access to the course?
Forever! After enrolling, you have unlimited lifetime access to this course - across any and all devices you own.
Does the teacher provide feedback?
No. If you are interested in receiving feedback on your project, we encourage you to check out KYD's Manuscript Assessment Service: https://killyourdarlings.com.au/shop/manuscript-assessments/
How do I access my course?
All our online courses are hosted at workshops.killyourdarlings.com.au, via the Teachable platform. You can access your course by logging in at that link, or by following the link in your welcome email when you enrol. Please note that as the Teachable platform is a separate website to KYD you will need to create a new account, and will not be able to use your KYD login details.
I'm a KYD member. How do I receive my 10% discount?
Click on 'Enrol in course for $169'. Enter the coupon code that was emailed to you when you became a KYD member at checkout, underneath the tutor's photo.
What if I have another question?
You can email us at [email protected] and we'll be happy to help!

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